tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3193715019743901547.post5150487958991436327..comments2014-01-22T01:34:12.287-08:00Comments on DRIFTING SAND漂流砂, HIDDEN WATER隠された水: Drifting Sand, Hidden BleachCrimzhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13915165239214593913noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3193715019743901547.post-74658161066623960462011-02-17T10:01:57.710-08:002011-02-17T10:01:57.710-08:00No problem ^^
Okay I remember now, yeah :)
Hopeful...No problem ^^<br />Okay I remember now, yeah :)<br />Hopefully I'll eventually start posting about Go again, but right now I'm just not feeling it >.><br />Which is pretty crazy, since I used to be like Canada's hugest Go fanatic or something hahaha<br />I still love Go, but I have a new dream. In fact, my writing dream is actually a lot older than my Go master dream, it had just never sparked a big enough flame in the past!Crimzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13915165239214593913noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3193715019743901547.post-51867448578238660502011-02-11T05:30:24.781-08:002011-02-11T05:30:24.781-08:00Ha ha ha, no, we don't know each other : )
You...Ha ha ha, no, we don't know each other : )<br />You posted your past blog (Duelist Domain) on lifein19x19.com and as a Go-player I was interested, so I followed ^^<br /><br />But anyway thanks for the kind words ; )SoDesuNenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3193715019743901547.post-22726831877806807312011-02-09T18:42:45.694-08:002011-02-09T18:42:45.694-08:00That's not nearly as easy though, as you can&#...That's not nearly as easy though, as you can't as easily replace the main character with yourself. Actually... I don't see why you can't, but Pokemon has far more scope for customization.Crimzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13915165239214593913noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3193715019743901547.post-36569996683299828862011-02-09T14:35:32.400-08:002011-02-09T14:35:32.400-08:00try doing a bleach or naruto fan fiction, that i w...try doing a bleach or naruto fan fiction, that i would like to readAllen Changhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05223256420654360622noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3193715019743901547.post-41566028071048299392011-02-09T14:25:54.821-08:002011-02-09T14:25:54.821-08:00No, you're absolutely right! I was actually ki...No, you're absolutely right! I was actually kind of thinking about that as I was writing, about how I kept stopping to describe stuff. Even though the descriptions seemed necessary, the timing seemed off and you just pinpointed the perfect reasoning, thanks!! I'll eventually redo all of this, so that will help a lot!<br />P.S. My memory sucks, I was just wondering if I knew you outside of my blogs? I want to get to know my most loyal reader who has given me countless useful comments! ^^Crimzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13915165239214593913noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3193715019743901547.post-36722734406042694832011-02-09T14:25:01.408-08:002011-02-09T14:25:01.408-08:00This comment has been removed by the author.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12644838615926021161noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3193715019743901547.post-55932876573166855842011-02-09T02:19:17.068-08:002011-02-09T02:19:17.068-08:00Yep, still here, but as I'm not really fluent ...Yep, still here, but as I'm not really fluent in English I refrain from criticizing your work ^^<br /><br />The one thing, I'd like to say: I find writing long and detailed passages while trying to create some sort of suspense is counterproductive.<br />I.e. when you write that Crimz and the other two suddenly hear a burst of explosions and are running towards its source, I think it's not a good idea to start characterizing the city at that point. I guess you want a faster pace, daring the reader to read further and further to reveal the mystery behind the explosions. I always found this accomplished best by using sentences, which have a strong focus.<br />Imagine you were in this situation, hearing explosions and stuff, how would you describe it to your friends?<br /><br />But well, well this is also a matter of taste, I guess ; )SoDesuNenoreply@blogger.com